Feedback Sheets

These are the first lot of feedback sheets we got our class to fill out. This is when we showed the class the two different drafts. The majority of feedback was the same, they didn't like the lack of titles on the group version but couldn't read the titles on Julias version. One class member also said that in the groups version there was too much 'messing around' , she meant within in the characters that they would be more serious. In the final edit you can see that there is much less of 'messing around'. Overall most of the class were able to guess the genre from our title sequence, which shows we were effective.